2006 Form Challenges
#10a Italian Sestet

Italian Sestet

The original version of the Italian Sestet had no set meter, but after it was introduced into England by Spenser, the poets there used Iambic tetrameter or pentameter.

The rhyme pattern is as follows; a, b, c, a, b, c,

The music is softer now, thinking of you
Even more the wine has softened the mood
My eyes are ready to close it's the end of day
There is just one final act I have to do
Enough of life today I have viewed
My last thought "I love you" I have to say.

Ryter Roethicle



Italian Sestet Posts



Kathy Anderson

Because of You
Incongruity
Prelude

Lorraine Dafney

Lead the Way

Kevin McKinney

Tabula Rasa

Spudmick Murphy

In the Quest to Understand
Tomorrows Face, Today

Ryter Roethicle

Believe in Dragons
Celestial Paths
City of Angels
Vacuumed
Welcome Spring

Trewir Wintlek

Present Day War Warning



Kathy Anderson

Because of You

Because of you my eyes cry obsidian drops
As round as blue-light stars
Winking from your stormy blast of ice,
Spars of my ship broken matchstick props
Barely small enough to be just scars,
There because your cost was too high a price.

Because of you there was inspiration,
But I found my fugue out of tune,
So I kept a melody of what was good.
Because of you I found consolation,
I weep, I dance, I remember June,
And awake from dreamers mist as I should.

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Incongruity

When you talk to me there is light
Though confusion ensues within my mind
Easy words do evoke high emotions.
How do you know my hearts true plight?
Thoughts betray intentions in kind
Can you forget this heart, my only devotion?

Perplexity (Response)

When you talk to me there is light
Though confusion ensues within my mind
Easy words do evoke high emotions.
How do you know my hearts true plight?
Thoughts betray intentions in kind
Can you forget this heart, my only devotion?

Ryter Roethicle -----

Prelude

Cinnabar lips consume cloves of richest scent
Only to find the hue of a heart gone cold,
A climate uncomforted by oolong teas.
A fugue resounds about, though solstice be spent,
As a change of key unlocks miseries old
Lament in new symphonic tisanes appease.

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Lorraine Dafney

Lead the Way

At the end of the day when its twilight
I can see your shadow on the pathway
Where you wait for me as you've done before
But this time the clouds prevent sunsets light
You reach for my hand and show me the way
To our home where love is ever more

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Kevin McKinney

Tabula Rasa

A stark, white page is a frightening thing
To a poet with tales too true to tell;
But aren't we all disposed to discover
The difference between a clown and a king,
An empty barrel from a silver bell,
Or the odds of friends becoming lovers?

A vacant stage is a harrowing place
When the lights all dim for soliloquy;
And all you can stammer to state your cause
Of last resort, is the tenuous grace
Of invention's mother, necessity;
But her script is written on thinnest gauze.

So it's off you go adlibbing the lines;
And choosing most among myriad themes,
The easier terrains and gentler grades;
The soft metered feet, the simplest rhymes
Served only to soothe susceptible dreams
Instead of the truth; of which you're afraid.

At dawn each day comes a promising gift;
Despite your mood for the wrapping it's in,
It contains no map, but a stark, white page
With a logo seen as the dark clouds lift;
A stage adorned as a path that begins
Where a signpost stands that reads: Have Courage!

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Spudmick Murphy

In The Quest To Understand

How long did we play in the clouds;
collecting stars to flint heart's fires
and moondust to seed eternity?
How long did we shun earthly crowds;
propagating naked desires,
unashamed, in anonymity?

When did fate turn on its axis,
bringing storm to cleave our passions
and rend the clouds that protected us?
Whose green eyes cursed our happiness?
What god would wreak devastation
on souls joined by love's umbilicus?

Our pains deserving of truthful answers.
Can we climb the sky again, to find them?

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Tomorrow's Face, Today

Last night's rains bequeathed deep puddles
to city streets and parking lots,
tightly crowded with cars and self-absorbed shoppers.
In the midst of close-eyed muddles,
two boys on bikes, feigned as despots,
wreaked their rule, by skewing the eyes of car mirrors.

When they had bored of this foul sport,
they seized an empty shopping cart;
treating her, unasked, to a tango's maneuvers.
But glory's dance was broken short.
The cart flung in the deepest part
of puddle. Warning: Beware all future lovers.

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Ryter Roethicle

Believe In Dragons

Believe in dragons, that they may live again.
Lording over land and sea, the gentle beast
The time is ripe that we may live in fantasy
Cannot fantasy and life be both the same?
Knightly lore was blackest deed and evil feast
Cannot we believe and see what we will see?

For dragons lore was part of what used to be.
But blackest deeds and wicked tricks overthrow
Magic helped the reigned lord to gain his power.
Hear amid our deepest dreams the creatures plea.
Whilst secretly they hide and secretly they grow
Now they emerge welcomed from their bower.

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Celestial Paths

Two lovers looked towards the sky and wished.
A star in the night sky winked back at them.
Thinking he’d granted them their wish they smiled,
And they walked along their paths enriched.
Paths are known to part, so we should not condemn
The star, she did not intend the lovers to beguile.

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City of Angels

I tried to listen to the earth today
and all I heard was the scream of jets.
The Earth breathes and lives and cares.
But nothing works here there is no way.
Black car fumes, dust and cigarettes
breathe, and live in this filth, who dares?

Rain will not wash away this kind of filth,
those in control are deaf, and set in mind,
The boom of the earth they have not heard,
nor do they care about their peoples health
They silence those who care and are kind
for they have never known or cared?


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Vacuumed

You did love me what else could cause this pain,
And I loved you no less, and I feel the same,
No harm was meant, but loss was ne’r ‘thout cost.
Even when happiness was all that’s meant to gain
Now the price that’s paid is coated with my shame
But by far tis you that is the greatest loss.


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Welcome Spring

I heard a sound today in the trees outside
The magpies heard and with the plovers joined in,
As they celebrated the last shower of rain.
God had breathed out, the wind smiled and cried
Green shoots emerged, and new life began.
Spring has returned, and He loves us again.

I heard a sound today in the trees outside
And that of children playing on the park close by,
Because winters confinement is now unchained.
Today the future smiled whilst winter cried
And then again we saw a clear blue sky.
Spring has returned, and He loves us again.

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Trewir Wintlek

Present Day War Warning

Is there not one ounce of love seeded and buried within their minds?
Let them now suffer for the hideous crimes of our time!
Their followers, no longer important these serious attacks.
Did you decipher their names and make since to the symbolical finds?
Fatigue and blind-sided arrived, to the dirt of histories time of slime.
Masterminds of deceit and reprisal attacks most absurdly will slack.

The Son no longer shines over these unworthy humankind.
Worms and maggots slither, destroying, disrupting evil human insides.
Slowly and painfully the wicked and evil must die!
The Wise-herd has arrived with Magical wands, inflame sectarian evil minds.
Numerous coalitions; brewing, stirring inside and outside.
Gods proclaimed Eagles, sent to unravel and revise these, despicable ties.

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