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2007 Form Challenges
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The Ballade as its name suggests is a French form and along with the Rondeau
was one of the first forms to be standardised in the 14th cetury. Written in
syllabic prosody of any one line length, the original
French forms were octosyllabic, but now decasyllable is more common, and iambic
tetrameter etc; are just as acceptable.
The construction is 28 lines which are divided into three octave stanzas and an
envoi. Below is an excellent example of this form.
Envelope BalladeThe Envelope Ballade is just as interesting a form as the basic Ballade. However, the Refrain begins and ends each stanza. The construction is similar with the rhyme pattern changing to: A, b, a, b, c, a, c A, and the envoy c, a, c A,Here is an example of this form.
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Ballade Challenge Replies
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Maryse Achong![]() He was known as the village Romeo Flirting with every female that he met The ladies still it seemed could not say no Surrounding him at every dance and fete, They just could not resist his charm, they let Him have his way with them - oh happy days! Though he swore he’d always be in their debt; The time had come for him to change his ways. And then one night after a late, late show, He was walking back to his home, upset There was no damsel on his arm, when lo! He spied a female form ahead; he bet Himself that she was lost; perhaps he’d ‘get Lucky’ still he wagered, (to use a phrase), Though it seemed he would have a good time yet; The time had come for him to change his ways. He approached her quickly and in sotto Voce he greeted her, started a tête- à-tête: and soon he was prepared to go With her, until he lit a cigarette. What he saw made him break out in a sweat- Her yes like burning coals were now ablaze, He felt that he was under serious threat. The time had come for him to change his ways. It seemed he’d become trapped in his own net Almost captured by La Diablesse’s gaze He broke into a run, now soaking wet The time had come for him to change his ways. ----- Local Characters ![]() Papa Bois is father of the forest, Caretaker of the animals and trees Be careful of how you behave there lest You incur his wrath, for that is when he’s A fearsome foe, and not one to displease. A half man and half beast he is well known To all the people of the West Indies: These legendary tales are all home grown. ![]() The Soucouyant’s an uninvited guest, An evil crone who sheds her skin with ease, And like a ball of fire starts her quest For human blood; and neither locks nor keys Can stop her, and nothing else will appease Her. She cuts through the sky when light has flown, And sucks her fill of blood, with expertise. These legendary tales are all home grown. ![]() The Douens are little spirits who weren’t blessed, Sometimes you hear their voices as they tease, Calling to others, little souls possessed; But warn your children to ignore their pleas. Far better stay inside for they will seize Them; small blank faces that whimper and moan Little back to front feet and knobbly knees. These legendary tales are all home grown. Like pollen that is carried on a breeze, These narratives like seeds have been well sown, They’ve travelled over land and over seas, These legendary tales are all home grown. ----- Perfect Friend He’s there His hand outstretched calling to you; The answers which we seek all lie in Him, He offers peace of mind, a love that’s true; Although He may not grant our every whim, He listens to us when we call His name, And even when we ignore Him and do Things as we want, which fail, He gets the blame. He’s there His hand outstretched calling to you He’s there His hand outstretched calling to you, Our guiding Light when all the world seems dim, And though we seldom give Him His just due He’s the One who fills our cup to the brim; We drink our fill, dismiss Him to our shame; And His demands on us are really few, He loves us and asks that we do the same. He’s there His hand outstretched calling to you He’s there His hand outstretched calling to you When laughter’s fled and the future looks grim, When we imagine that our life is through, And that our only option, sink or swim Is to find Him, to try and keep the flame Of love alive in us as we subdue Harsh feelings that may want to stake their claim. He’s there His hand outstretched calling to you No fickle friend is He, no passing game, He’s The Friend amongst all friends in my view; Our happiness His main focus, His aim He’s there His hand outstretched calling to you. ----- Perfect Vision We live and learn I know that refrain well, And every day presents facts that are new, That bring a smile or sound a warning bell Or lift a veil from eyes so we see through The outer skin of those we thought we knew; That may or may not be a pretty sight, But knowledge lends us power to accrue The wisdom to make choices that are right. We are never too old to learn they tell Us: we always have the chance to review Our opinions, and perhaps to dispel Doubts, or on the other hand, bid adieu To things and situations which imbue Our lives with sadness; then to our delight We’ll gain, if we to our own selves are true, The wisdom to make choices that are right. Perhaps we are at time too prone to dwell On painful events caused by people who Like books we judged by their cover, their shell, And that’s a really silly thing to do; So easy to be wrong, to misconstrue Their actions; for that can put us in quite An awful place and hard pressed to pursue The wisdom to make choices that are right. Sometimes we wonder what all the ado Was about, when at last the long-sought light Is visible and we can tap into The wisdom to make choices that are right. back to list |
Sal CoraccioIt was the latter part of fall, the sky like slate grew cold with mist, and though it promised us a squall with growing winds that doth persist to make the tavern's signpost twist, we kept our tankards filled with rum and sang of friends and maidens kissed, the day the dragon ate William. It started, as I do recall, as William slammed his meaty fist and took to wave it at us all on muscled arms and heavy wrist; was someone worthy in our midst, who would, on challenge, with him come - he was so obviously pissed, the day the dragon ate William. Yet none among us took the call, we having known or having guessed, that it involved the grisly wall and nearby cave of late possessed, and though we made a harsh protest, he gave our noses all the thumb and stormed right out without assist, the day the dragon ate William. We should have tried but he'd insist - who'd have thunk the boast would kill him; we sang him drunk on his great quest, the day the dragon ate William. |
Lorraine DafneyI want you to know I love you For you are everything to me But that my dear, you always knew And that you shall remain to be My one and only happiness You lift my spirits when I'm blue You share your love with openess I want you to know I love you I want you to know I love you I want you to know I'm happy I want you to know my love is true This love beyond eternity You make simplicity joyous There is nothing I wouldn't do Your love is always generous I want you to know I love you I want you to know I love you And that is a life guarantee To share with you each sunsets view We are so blessed, I must confess Silence becomes music for two Let us listen to the vastness I want you to know I love you We shall always have this closeness This and much more I believe to Be our try at love endless I want you to know I love you back to list |
Ryter RoethicleSo much to do so much to share True loves helps in time of pain With each love a life of care Helping each other to sustain Love as much as you would deign We lie on the bed together Our love our life forged a chain No one will separate us ever. No longer knowing I am there Constantly hearing "what's your name?" These last months have seen so much wear We have loved and will again. Your mind died before the frame At least in death we'll be together Our love will not have been in vain No one will separate us ever. Stroke my face in mindless care A reflex from a half dead brain I wish, but there is nothing there No conversation, just refrain. No tears left and no shirt to stain I know now love is forever What we have lost we will regain No one will separate us ever. Life in your eyes begins to wain Our ties with life we now sever. Sleep my love dream of Cockaigne No one will separate us ever. Pills we took soon closed your eyes Our breathing slows, no more sighs Feel what I've done is for the best And you fall asleep against my chest ----- Gippsland Floods The hard beating rain came with the wind, Roaring and slashing through the trees And the winter scene was harshly skinned As if to bring arboreal life to its knees And its death was all that would please Nature in what was thought her rage. Instead she had listened to our pleas Be careful what you wish for in this age. The oaks and pines, knowing their place, Had bowed down to her as she passed, Those that had ignored had been erased The wise have survived her mighty blast. The storm has eased and is now the past Now is the time to start with a clean page Will man take advantage of his wish at last? Be careful what you wish for in this age. A once parched land has broke it’s drought With dried up beds now o’rflown banks And flooded plains from east winds route But the filling dams we must give thanks Streets awash now show a river scene Rubber life-boats are now all the rage There’s a gap where the bridge had been Be careful what you wish for in this age. El Nino’s gone and La Nina’s in her place There is now a reading in rain’s gauge How long I wonder will we see this face Be careful what you wish for in this age. ----- Il percorso sotto le stelle When there is nothing above us but stars Below us is the path we choose to walk Let me walk with you and it will be ours Do not rush your thoughts, let us just talk. If perhaps in time we should choose to kiss And linger in some spot for untold hours For what is love but time spent just in bliss When there is nothing above us but stars When there is nothing above us but stars Then heaven is open for us to touch What are clouds but blankets, never bars So that each time we reach out to clutch They will have warmed each of our dreams We will watch as the icy mist disappears In the freshness of morn plan our schemes When there is nothing above us but stars When there is nothing above us but stars The moon lights up our path along our way Must we treat the shadows like our fears That in time might just betray? Consider them once part of something whole Now ethereal gifts from light years afar Time has blessed us and took away control When there is nothing above us but stars. Time can’t be controlled in spite of power The path we take is carved by life’s scars Ignore them love, let’s find a fragrant bower When there is nothing above us but stars. ----- One Fine Day One fine day my dreams will come true As my lover walks to me out of the mist, From that moment I will never again be blue And heaven will resound once we have kissed. Once in my arms we will love forever more With only each others needs to pursue Two united souls, with eternity to explore One fine day my dreams will come true. One fine day my dreams will come true I will know this once we have kissed No heaven nor Earth just that one view Shared ever, triggered by one sweet kiss. Just two mature lovers wanting more Yet what we seek is nothing really new Each room with a window has a door One fine day my dreams will come true. One fine day my dreams will come true And forevermore will be a time of bliss Each night our vows of love we’ll renew As with the moon and stars we co-exist. With the break of day as most life wakens The night time heavens fade from view Strolling easily on the path we’ve taken One fine day my dreams will come true Reaching each fork along this new way Sharing life’s adventure now all is new And even black is a lighter shade of grey One fine day my dreams will come true ----- Part Moon Only part a moon rises in the sky Still it lightens the Jacaranda leaves The darkness is no longer an ally In removing the thoughts my mind perceives I know the truth is what my heart believes That chill half-hearted light now brings remorse And welcomes now the more delightful eves Into a soul more wanting to stay its course. New moon tonight has ridden up on high It's brightened rays send forth silver sheaves And make the shadowy side ignore the lie Until dawn turns blue, finally darkness leaves To disappear until night again achieves And creates a memory of this growing force Created by two lovers who conceive Into a soul more wanting to stay its course. But now old moon that is drawn so fine Your sleepless face can barely bless the wreaths On the ground with one grey kiss as you die Put sharpened blades of light into their sheaths In a night of darkness sanity grieves But a love once held strong needs no recourse Knowing now that darkness helps lovers weave Into a soul more wanting to stay its course. Unseen in darkness your lover receives Your words a gentle murmur to endorse Knowing that eternity is all and recedes Into a soul that thought to stay its course. ----- Somewhere in time III Somewhere in time two lovers kissed And time stood still for just a while Creating a mood of supreme bliss Fate looked down and began to smile. She is not heartless nor is she cruel And recognised that true love exists Seeing that this indeed was a jewel Somewhere in time two lovers kissed Somewhere in time the lovers wished Separate upon the fullness of the moon They wished that they could be united And even more that it would be soon. Fate listened and granted their wish Proving with love you need to persist Now they have met, each other cherish Somewhere in time two lovers kissed Somewhere in time two lovers walked Along the path that Fate had ordained As they walked they kissed and talked Through eternity their love remained Together they’re still sharing one soul The moon and stars have witnessed this And forevermore this shall be so Somewhere in time two lovers kissed Somewhere in time Fate made a vow And kept that vow throughout all time The Gods all said that this was fine Somewhere in time two lovers kissed. ----- Xenobiotic, a Protest I have found myself, not that I was lost More that I was tangled in the web of life The spider of that life made me pay the cost And just in time I was able to use a knife To cut myself free and get back on my path. Even though its winter I must stand the frost That disdainful breath of Fate and her wrath I have found myself, not that I was lost I have found myself, not that I was lost But I was an alien living in a foreign land An icy world where there was eternal frost Emotionless where everything was planned Smiles were sought and friendship bought And love came only at an exorbitant cost Was it love or simply an expensive thought? I have found myself, not that I was lost I have found myself, not that I was lost Corporations and politicians control on life Again today I thought about all the cost. The cost of oil, of terrorism and the strife Global warming, ozone layers and such. Third the world is burning, another in frost, There is all that flooding not leaving much I have found myself, not that I was lost I cannot isolate myself, that is a crime I must speak out loud, or pay the cost And such is the purpose of this rhyme I have found myself, not that I was lost. back to list |
Leny RooversThe mountain that I chose to climb is tall- on clear days I can barely see its peak, the narrow path is treacherous and crawls in twisting curves round crevices and creeks. Beneath my feet loose stones and branches squeak, each foothold is precariously tried as slowly I will master the technique to overcome this hardship, stay upright. This vibrant rock is living, it enthrals; the sights along the road distract- I’m weak, each vista is seductive and it stalls the steady progress upwards that I seek. The summit is still far, the chance unique to break new ground and trust my guide, to follow in his footsteps and be meek- to overcome this hardship, stay upright. The gully is constricting with high walls, as light has been cut off, the pass looks bleak; the crowns of trees a ceiling for this hall where high amidst the leaves a falcon shrieks. I raise my head and see her wings in streak, the fast flight downward to the prey she eyed; it breaks my thrall and I at last can speak to overcome this hardship, stay upright. Restraining bonds shrugged off, I dare to peek, new energy bursts free with every stride; the words I cried from eyes have leaked to overcome this hardship, stay upright.
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Carly Svamvour(An Acrostic Ballade) Silent is night 'neath star-spackled heavens In tandem, earth reels with the galaxy. Daughters of the north hearth shiver; husbands engage strong sons at cuts of fallen trees. Roaring fires render winter's cruelty essentially helpless. In plaintiff call, a lone wolf howls its song, 'cross the snowy limbo of dreams, like life in a glass ball. Sleep comes easy out there in the woodlands, 'neath eiderdown and old pine; big cities of the world seem nothing more than craven waxwork, destined to poison minds - dis-ease for the lonely heart - tempest for the naive adolescents who yearn for bright lights, all lingering at the edge of a lazy limbo of dreams, like life in a glass ball. Pander me not with the palaverin' on all of the latest amenities enshrined in the suburbs, the exurbs and tenpenny bullfeather bureaucracies. I would, if given my druthers or leave, choose to be right out there under the all absorbing awe, this star-tangled hazy limbo of dreams, like life in a glass ball. Hearken the call to the northland, take ease on a down-feathered bed. As the snow falls, we shall turn, in tune with the galaxy's limbo of dreams, like life in a glass ball. -----
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Trewir WintlekLasting impulse and full of energy Making rhythm as he blazes each road Thinking and leading loving words run free Just like some people to much fondness told Yet, positive thoughts he’s out of the norm Courageous convictions of world words plea Will he succeed when it’s time to perform? Lasting impulse and full of energy To hear her of truth, respected they be Seeing wiser things in life, she takes hold Sharing enthusiasm graciously This lady is interesting as gold A lover or friend, marvelously warm Her perceptions are worthy and bubbly And just like some, sensitivity storms Lasting impulse and full of energy With his rhythm and her truth there they be Making love wiser, they blaze a new road He leads his lady to fondest love spree Her sensitivity guilds with his hold Their friendship thus has transformed And waves of loving thoughts run freely A gentleman, a lady now conform Lasting impulse and full of energy Their love brings in a magnetically swarm Combining their thought waves floating highly Loving essence shown as their love life forms Lasting impulse and full of energy ----- Flower Power She is a pink Acacia, elegant a lady she be She holds yellow Acacias, not telling love secrets of he She is his finest collection an Acanthus not to betray She will sway with his direction She is a pink Acacia She is a pink Acacia From time to time hopeless she be A gift of snowdrop blossoms frayed Giving her hope and setting free Thoughts of painful recollections Scattered ‘round her Agrimony of her firm appreciation She is a pink Acacia She is a pink Acacia held guilt inside her, she sees Lovers of Almond flavored days some lack of will and frenzy From past actions and transgressions many Aloes were potpourri Removed from grieving emotions She is a pink Acacia Flowered messages creations Spoken and written to portray bouquets of Jonquils affection She is a pink Acacia ----- “Time” Up and down in depth roads that spin and reel Turning again, stopping being astound Born to live and grasp hold of what life deals Every turn and twist leads to one more bound Time elapsing into another ground Weaving in and out of past time darkness Directing and etching a life more sound Slowing time down absorbing peacefulness Accepting life’s captivating appeal Changing passions throughout life, you have found Making the most and feeling each zeal Will next steps taken be wrong or profound? Seeing mistakes that others kill and wound Reminding you to strive to happiness Time’s freely waiting, accomplish what’s sound Slowing time down and absorbing peacefulness Rushing through time, passing up time surreal Escaped horror’s back to life whirling ‘round Finding time’s well meaning and empyreal Time wanders quick and freely without sound Minutes been wasted making life confound Hours spent unimpressed with laziness Timeless memories of loved ones renowned Slowing time down and absorbing peacefulness Will your time be spent wise on solid ground? Will hours be wasted in hopelessness? In time with help and patience you’ll be found Slowing time down and absorbing peacefulness. back to list |
Nicola WynterRomes tree has called her home to it, While Empires crop will less than sate, Her taste is for the apples wit The one and only, best to wait For, for only this can we sit Down to dine, for love's sublime match Can be found under moons glow lit, A golden moment to there catch. Impossible sweet Crispin pit Spit upon loves ground none too late To grow eternal fruits, so writ. For all the kinds and ways we relate Such variety man creates, Heaven on earth where we're bewitched And there we may then conjugate A golden moment to there catch. For apple blossoms just one whit Is all it takes to integrate Soul mates star stones so tightly knit, Such a shining moment awaits Them in their eternity gate Which passing through brings no mismatch , Just another sign that waits A golden moment to there catch. When time has gone, no blooms do quit, For sun forever bless their patch Of evermore rich dreams a bit, A golden moment to there catch. back to list |
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